Underground World

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One Day Me,Jordan and Trevor went on a walk.

I tripped On a root and knocked my friends over.

We slid down a hill and fell down a hole.

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We saw a light I realized it was an Eletric wall.

We thought we would die.

The next thing I know were in water.

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Some strange person wiped out on his surfboard.

He was knocked down under water by a tidal wave.

He saw us and brought us to land.

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He got the others to get us awake and we woke up.

I said, “What’s happening?”.

Then we sat up I said, “Who are you? Where are we?”.

The people said, “We brought you to land.

One of our people found you under water.”

Trevor said, “Cool”.

Jordan said, “This is strange”.

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We finally woke up all the way.

They said we’d gone to a different world.

But then darkness started to spread.

A big monster rose from the sea.

It had a strange sort of zapper coming out of it’s mouth. It zapped one of the people and they turned to stone. The monster got away.

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The people saw him being taken away by the monster. They asked us to save him.

We went to the surfboard shack, because that is where they told us to go. We entered a code on a surfboard and it took us to an underground lair.

We saw some kinds of gear. We suited up and got ready for battle.

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We set off on our adventure. We were sailing for two days until we hit an island the grains of sand were black. we approached the island, walked onto it an found a black kingdom, and we walked in.

It was suspicious that no one attacked us yet. Then right when we didn’t expect it, an enemy fell down on us.

I kicked him right off us. Trevor punched him. Jordan slid under him and kicked him right over.

Then we went farther into the kingdom. We saw the monster. We aproached it and then it attacked us. I kicked him right in the head, Trevor punched him in the gut, and Jordan kicked him where it hurts. He fell down. I had a sword that I placed right where he was falling. The sword went through his heart and he died. We set all of the stone creatures free. We beat him and it was all over.

We found a way back home, so we climbed up. All of our gear was gone and everything was back to normal.

The End.

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22 Responses to Underground World

  1. Loann says:

    Great story Jake! Loved the surfer dude.

  2. Way to go Jake!!! I love your stories and the pictures.

  3. Trevor says:

    You tiped T-R-E-V-E-O-R not Trevor!

  4. jake says:

    Oops! I’ll fix it!

  5. OwenW.77 says:

    Love the story Jake!

  6. Victoria says:

    I like you stories and you pictures nice job!

  7. Victoria says:

    What I ment to say is I like your pictures and your stories. I’m am an idiot!!!!!!!!

  8. Victoria says:

    Seriously I am an idiot!!!!!

  9. Victoria says:

    If you dont believe me ask my dad!!!!

  10. taylor /from forth grade says:

    hi I go to school at kesington I think your vidioes are awsome

  11. taylor /from forth grade says:

    I heard your website on the anonsments at school.Whos class are you in

  12. jake says:

    taylor I am in 3rd Grade

  13. jake says:

    which tailor are you?

  14. Victoria101 says:

    wassup?

  15. Victoria101 says:

    how old r u again?

  16. jake says:

    almost 9 victoria

  17. Taylor says:

    Wow!! My step sister Victoria told me about your website!! awesome!!!

  18. Taylor says:

    Sorry….my sister(victoria) is a loser!!

  19. Trevor Britton says:

    WHAT A LOT OF COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  20. jake says:

    nothin

  21. jake says:

    im 10 now

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